Saturday, December 19, 2015

Silly Saturday: Throwback to the Mirror

This is a throwback to my first attempt at a novel. It's bad. I leave it in its original formatting.

THE MIRROR

I START WITH A BOY WHO FINDS A MIRROR IN HIS ATTIC. HIS NAME IS JACK, JACK AND HIS SISTER ARE IN THE ATTIC LOOKING FOR A CHEST. WHEN THEY SEE THE CHEST THEY BOTH GRAB IT AND WALK TOWARDS THE DOOR. JACK TAKES 3 STEPS AND ALL OFF A SUDDEN!!!! CRACK! JACK STARTED TO TALK BUT HE WAS BEING SUCKED INTO THE MIRROR. HE LANDED ON HIS HEAD AND GOT A CONCUSION. WHEN HE WOKE UP HE WAS IN A BED SURROUNDED BY A (MALE) WEREWOLF (NAMED MAX)-A (MALE) HALF-VAMPIRE (NAMED COUNT ALUCARD)- A (FEMALE) FIRE LIZZARD (NAMED REDISH)-A (NON FEMALE OR MALE) ALIEN (NAMED TRI)-A GIRL (NAMED TASHA)- A DARK IMAGE OF JACK (NAMED KCAJ)-AND A WIZARD (NO NAME). THEY STARTED ASKING JACK QUESTIONS BUT JACK WAS TIRED HE OPENED HIS MOUTH AND YELLED ‘LEAVE ME ALONE’. AS JACK SAID THIS THEY ALL LEFT AT ONCE. JACK SLEPT AMD DREAMED ABOUT A HOUSE OF MIRRORS AT A CARNIVAL. WHEN JACK AWOKE HE WAS DRENCHED IN SWEAT. HE WAS BREATHING HARD HE LOOKED AROUND AND SAW NOBODY. SO HE GOT UP AND WENT DOWN STAIRS AND WALKED INTO WHAT LOOKED LIKE THE KITCHEN. INSIDE IT WAS A ROBOT THAT WAS WASHING DISHES THE ROBOT TOOK NO NOTICE OF JACK. JACK CAME TO ANOTHER FLIGHT OF STAIRS HE WALKED DOWN THEM. DOWN THE STAIRS WAS THE WIZARD. THE WIZARD SAW JACK AND STARTED BLABING, ‘JACK I AM GOING TO TRAIN YOU IN THE TIME-LESS CHAMBER.’ JACK TOLD THE WIZARD ‘ I UNDERSTAND’.
Chapter 2
BY THE TIME JACK LEARNED TO USE HIS NEW SWORD (ATLA) IT WAS TIME FOR BED. JACK WENT TO BED AND DREAMED OF HOME. WHEN JACK AWOKE THE GIRL AND THE MIRROR IMAGE OF JACK WERE STANDING ABOVE HIM. "DO YOU WANT TO COME WITH USE TO SCHOOL?" ASKED TASHA IN A NICE SOFT VOICE THAT FILLED THE ROOM. JACK HAD HIS EYES CLOSED WHEN SHE WAS TALKING, BUT HE OPENED HIS EYES AND ANSWERED, "YES I’LL COME TO SKOOOOOL." HE GOT UP PUT THE NICEST OF HIS MIRROR IMAGES CLOTHES ON AND HE STILL LOOKED LIKE A GOTH. THEY WENT OUTSIDE AND WAITED AT A: SUB STOP JACK HAD READ THIS TO HIM SELF, THEY WERE ALL SILENT. THEY GOT ON THE SUB WHEN THE SUB STOPPED. JACK AND HIS FRIENDS SEPERATED KCAJ WENT TO THE BACK, TASHA WENT TO THE FRONT, AND JACK JUST SAT DOWN. FROM BEHIND JACK HE HEARD A NOISE " WHAT SPECIES OF MYSTICAL CREATURE ARE YOU? (SNIFF) BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE A ELF TO ME, BUT ELF'S DON’T WEAR GOTH CLOTHES……………………" THIS WENT ON TILL THE SUB STOPPED AND JACK GOT OFF. WHEN JACK GOT OFF HE WENT INSIDE AND STARTED CLASS LIKE A REGULAR DAY. HIS FRIST CLASS WAS A CLASS HE HAD NEVER HEARD OF. AT THE END OF SCHOOL HE SAW HIS OTHER SMOKING OUTSIDE AND TASHA WAS GOING TOWARDS HIM AND ASKED, " DO YOU HAVE ANY GUM?" HIS OTHER SAID, " NO I DON’T HAVE ANY NOW BACK OFF" AND PUSHED TASHA OFF THE TOP FLIGHT OF STAIRS (THERE’S 120 STEPS) BUT WHERE JACK WAS STANDING HE CAUGHT TASHA. SHE HAD HER EYES CLOSED WHEN SHE WAS PUSHED. AT THIS POINT IN TIME SHE DECIDED TO OPEN HER EYES AND RIGHT ABOVE HER WAS JACK. JACK OPEND HIS MOUTH TO ASK TASHA IF SHE WAS OK BUT THE SECOND HE DID SHE WAS KISSING HIM AND HE KISSED BACK. BUT KCAJ DIDN’T LIKE THIS KISSING STUFF SO HE DECEDED TO GO DOWN THE STAIRS AND BREAK THEM UP. WELL HE WENT DOW STAIRS AND PUSHED THEM APART "GROSS YOU SICKOS KISSINGS FOR COUPLES." TASHA LOOKED UP AND SAID THESE EXACT WORDS "YOU JUST WISH YOU HAD ME KCAJ." KCAJ WAS RED HOT MAD AT HER NOW BUT HE MADE A COME BACK "NO SEE IF I KISSED YOU IT WOULD BE YOUR LAST." TASHA ONLY NODDED AND ROLLED HER EYES. THEY GOT ON THE SUB.

CHAPTER 3

THEY GOT OFF AT THE MANSION AND AT THE FRONT DOOR WAS THE WIZARD. THE FRIST PERSON TO WALK UP TO THE DOOR WAS KCAJ BUT THE WIZARD GRABBED KCAJ AND STARTED TALKING " DONT COME ANY CLOSER JACK YOU EITHER TASHA." THE WIZARD CUT KCAJ’S RIGHT HAND OFF AND KCAJ SCREAMED BUT MORE INPORTANTLY JACKS LEFT HAND VANISHED. JACK MOVED CLOSER TO HELP KCAJ BUT IT WAS NO USE THE WIZARD TOOK OUT A PISTOL AND SHOT JACK RIGHT IN THE HEART. HE REMAINED ALIVE AFTER THE SHOT BUT NONE UNDERSTAND WHY HE LIVED. AFTER THE FIRST SHOT THERE WAS ANOTHER IT ALSO HIT HIS HEART. AFTER THE SECOND SHOT TASHA STARTED TO CRY BUT WHEN JACK WAS SHOT A THRID TIME SHE GOT UP AND PULLED OUT A DAGGER AND THREW IT AT THE WIZARD. EVEN THOUGH IT MISSED THE WIZARD, KCAJ WAS SAVED BUT THEY COULDN’T SAVE JACK. JACK HAD DIED BUT THE LAST THING HE THOUGHT ABOUT WAS THE MATRIX. JACK OPENED HIS EYES HE WAS IN HIS ROOM. HE GOT UP AND WENT TO THE ATTIC HE JUMPED ON THE MIRROR AND STARTED TO CRY NOT BECAUSE HE WOULDN’T SEE TASHA AGAIN NO IT WAS BECAUSE HE HAD MIRROR FRAGMENTS IN HIS BUTT. JACK STOOD UP AND WENT DOWN STAIRS. HE BRUSHED HIS BUTT AND MIRROR SHARDS FELL EVERYWHERE. BUT SOMETHING ELSE WAS BUGGING HIM, HE FINALLY REMEMBERED IT THE BUS (SUB) HE RAN OUTSIDE BUT THE BUS WAS ALREADY GONE. JACK HAD TO WALK 10 MILES TO THE SCHOOL. IT TOOK HIM 3 HOURS TO GET TO SCHOOL AND BY THE TIME HE GOT TO THE SCHOOL IT WAS OVER (NOT REALLY BUT CLOSE ENOUGH). JACK WENT AROUND TO HIS CLASS TO SEE WHAT HOME WORK HE HAD BUT HE HAD NONE. HE WENT TO HIS LOCKER AND GRABBED HIS FAV. BOOK ROMEO AND JULEIT HE READ ALL HE COULD OF HIS BOOK THE FARTHEST HE GOT WAS TO A KISSING SCENE BUT HE HAD TO STOP THERE IT MADE HIM THINK TOO MUCH OF TASHA. HE SLAMMED HIS BOOK SHUT AND WATCHED A PIECE OF PAPER FLOAT DOWN TO HIS FEET. HE READ IT ALOUD "FIND ANOTHER MIRROR~MAYBE THE CARNIVIL CAN HELP~TONIGHT AT 8." HE WAS GOING TO THE CARNIVAL BUT HE WOULDN’T LIKE IT.

IT WAS ABOUT TIME TO LEAVE SCHOOL, SO HE LEFT EARLY. THE TRIP TO THE CARNIVAL WOULD BE A LONG ONE FOR JACK. IT TOOK JACK FIVE WHOLE HOURS TO WALK TO THE CARNVAL. THE CARNIVAL WASN’T OPEN YET SO JACK TOOK A NAP. WHEN JACK WOKE UP THE CARNIVAL WAS ALMOST OVER. SO JACK RAN FOR THE HALL OF MIRRORS AND JUMPED IN. JACK TOUCHED EVER MIRROR IN THE HALL NONE TOOK HIM BACK. SO JACK DECIDED TO LEAVE BUT THE DOOR WAS LOCKED, JACK PANICKED AND SCREAMED, " HELP SOMEBODY HELP SOMEBODY." HE DID THIS TILL HIS VOICE WAS GONE. THEN HE LEANED ON A MIRROR AND TRIED TO GO TO SLEEP. BUT IT WAS NO USE JACK HAD ALREADY FOUND THE MIRROR. HE FELL THROUGH THE MIRROR AND LANDED SOMEWHERE HE HAD NEVER SEEN OR BEEN TO. HE WAS IN AN ATTTIC THAT LOOKED LIKE HIS. ONLY IT WAS THE OPPOSITE OF HIS. HE LOOKED IN THE CORNER AND THERE WAS A MIRROR. THOUGHTS WENT THRUOGH JACKS HEAD THAT HE WANTED TO IGNORE BUT COULDN’T THE THOUGHTS THAT WENT THROUGH IS HEAD WERE LIKE THIS. WHERE'S IT GO? IS TASHA IN THERE? AM I GOING TO GO IN IT? IS IT REAL? IS IT A TRAP? IS IT A SECOND WORLD INSIDE THE SECOND WORLD? JACK SHOOK HIS HEAD EXSPECTING HIS THOUGHTS TO CLEAR. BUT IT DID NOT CLEAR HE JUST THOUGHT MORE. BUT IN THE END HE JUMPED TOWARDS THE MIRROR.

CHAPTER 5

JACK LANDED ON A SAND DUNE IN THE CENTER OF A LAVA PIT. HE STOOD ON THE DUNE FROZEN WITH FEAR. HE TURNED AROUND AND SAW A LAVA TIDLE WAVE. JACK GOT SCARED AND WONDERED WHO IN GOD'S NAME WOULD SAVE HIM. HE DECIDED HE WOULD JUST DIE HERE. JACK COLAPSED ON THE GROUND AND WENT UNCONCSIOUS. HE AWOKE IN A HOUSE IN A BED. HE GOT UP AND LOOKED AROUNED HE FOUND A GIRL. JACK WOKE HER UP " WHA…. OH IT’S YOU WHAT DO YOU WANT?" JACK LOOKED AT HER AND SAID, "I HAVE TO GO SAVE MY FRIENDS." JACK NOTICED SHE WAS ABOUT TO CRY. HE STARTED TO LEAVE WHEN SHE GOT UP JACK LOOKED AROUND AT WHERE SHE WAS BEFORE HE COULD SEE HER. SHE SHOUTED, " DON’T LOOK PERVERT I’M CHANGING." BUT SECRETLY SHE WAS LOOKING AT JACK AND BLUSHING. JACK WALKED OUT OF THE ROOM AND WAITED WHEN SHE FINALLY CAME OUT OF HER ROOM SHE WAS DRESSED IN A SPARKLY DRESS. JACK LOOKED AT HER AND SHE SAID " FORGET ABOUT YOUR FRIENDS" JACK VERY CALMLY SAID, " MY HEART ALL READY BELONGS TO SOMEBODY." THE GIRL ONLY MADE A, "OHHH" SOUND. JACK LOOKED OUT THE DOOR AND AT THE GIRL AND SAID, " IF YOU ARE GOING TO HELP CHANGE YOUR CLOTHES I WILL WAIT, IF YOU WILL NOT HELP JUST STAY." THE GIRL WENT INSIDE HER ROOM AND CAME OUT DRESSED SEMI-NORMALLY. JACK GOT UP AND WALKED OUTSIDE. THE GIRL STARTED TO TALK RIGHT AS JACK SAY A CLUE, "SO WHERE ARE THEY." JACK PICKED UP THE CLUE WICH JUST HAPPENED TO BE A PIECE OF PAPER. JACK ANSWERED HER AND READ THE NOTE AT THE SAME TIME. " WELL THEY SEEM TO BE…" JACK READ THE NOTE WICH READ: TI NI PMUJ DNA RORRIM NIATPMAC EHT OT OG OOT SYAS EH ESUOH SYOB A TA ERA EW. THEY SEEM TO BE AT A BOYS HOUSE BEHIND THE CAPTAIN MIRROR." JACK LOOKED EACH DIRECTION AND LICKED HIS FINGER AND PUT IT IN THE WIND. JACK WAS NOW LOOKING AT HIS WATCH. "WICH WAY IS THIS PLACE" THE GIRL POINTED NORTH AN ADDED, " 12 MILES THAT WAY." JACK TOOK OFF THAT DIRECTION AND NOBODY TALKED FOR THE WHOLE TRIP.
CH.6
SO WHEN THEY HIT THE MIRROR PLACE THE SILENCE WAS BROKEN. "LOOK THERE IT IS" SHE HAD SAID THIS BUT JACK JUST WANTED TO GET TO THE OTHER SIDE. WELL THE MIRROR WAS PROTECTED BY A POND BUT JACK JUST WALKED THROUGH IT AND JUMPED THROUGH THE MIRROR ON THE OTHER SIDE. JACK SAW NOBODY JUST A SEMI-BLANK COMPUTER THAT READ: "WAKE UP."

CH. 6 ½

JACK WOKE UP IN A ROOM NOT HIS OF COURSE BUT A ROOM WITH PICTURES ON THE WALL HE HAD TO LOOK CLOSE TO REALIZE THAT THEY ARE ALL OF HIM. HE LOOKED AROUND A LITTLE MORE AND REALIZED IT WAS A GIRLS ROOM. JACK GOT UP AND LOOKED UNDER THE BED JACK FOUND IT A DIARY. HE OPENED IT AND IT SAID INSIDE OVER AND OVER AGAIN: I LOVE JACK BLUEE SIGN TASHA MARY FOXX. SUPRISINGLY THAT WAS JACKS NAME INSIDE IT HE CAME OUT OF THE ROOM ONLY TO REALIZE HE WAS IN A DIFFERENT UNIVERSE.

CH.7

DOWN THE STAIRS JACK WENT AND DISCOVERED TASHA HE RAN TOWRDS TASHA BUT SHE ASKED HIM "WHO ARE YOU?" JACK KNEW WHAT WAS HAPPENING NOW. SOMEBODYS SCREWING WITH TIME. JACK ANSWERED TASHA "I AM JACK" TASHA LOOKED AT HER MOM AND SAID, " I THINK HIS CRAZY MOM." BUT MOM DID NOT MOVE SHE JUST STARED. JACK WENT WITH TASHA TO SCHOOL AND HE WITNESSED HOW SHE GOT SUCKED INTO THIS. IT WAS A RIP IN TIME BUT WHERE DID JACK COME IN. 5 MINUTES LATER JACK SAW HIMSELF GET SHOT AND THE WIZARD TAKE TASHA AND KCAJ. THEN JACK WAS THROWN TO A DIFFERENT STORY ONE ABOUT ALUCARD IT SEEMS ALUCARD WAS A MYSCHEVIOUS BANDIT UNTIL HE GOT SUCKED IN TIME. MAX LED A NORMAL LIFE. BUT THE WIZARD WAS A BILLIONAIR WHO MADE A GENE SPLITTER AND KILLED HIMSELF. JACK SAW THE GIRL WHO WAS SO PASSIONATE TO HELP HIM AND HE SAW A PRINCESS BUT AFTER THAT HE SAW BLACKNESS THEN HE HEARD A BEEP~BEEP SOUND AND THEN HE SAW HIS ROOM.
CH.7 ½
HE SLAMMED HIS HAND INTO THE CLOCK AND IT BROKE. JAKE GOT UP AND SAW A PIECE OF PAPER TAPED TO HIS CHEST. HE GENTLY TOOK IT OFF AND READ IT: ALUCARD: Z STREET NB, MAX: CHESTNUT STREET TEXAS, TASHA: L STREET DC, WIZARD: WALLSTREET NEW YORK, PRINCESS: PARIS FRANCE F STREET, TRI: MARS, REDISH: PLANET XXX12, NO NAME: NEXT DOOR.
Ch.8
JACK WENT ON WITH HIS DAY NORMALLY. UNTIL HE FOUND ANOTHER NOTE WITH DIRECTIONS ON IT. HE TRIED TO IGNORE THE FRIST ONE BUT THIS ONE WAS IMPORTANT. JACK READ IT ONLY TO DICOVER HE HAD TO GO HOME ALL HIS FRIENDS WERE THERE. JACK RAN DOWN THE HALL, RACED UP THE STAIRS, JUMPED OUT THE DOOR, ONLY TO STOP AT A HAT THERE. JACK TRUNED AROUNED SO HE WAS FACING HIS TEACHER. "WHERE ARE YOU GOING YOUNG MAN?" THE TEACHER ASKED. JACK REPLIED "HOME" AFTER SAYING THE E IN HOME. JACK WAS OFF AGAIN, RUNNING UNTIL HE COULD NOT SEE HIS TECHER ANYMORE. WHEN HE FINALLY GOT AWAY HE WAS PROUD. THEN HE WENT IN A DAZE AND WHEN HE CAME OUT HE HAD HIT A DOOR, HIS DOOR. HE OPENED THE DOOR AND THERE WAS TASHA AND THE PRINCESS. THEY WERE THERE WAITING HE WALKED UP TOWARDS THEM AND HE SAT DOWN THEY WERE SO GLAD TO SEE HIM TASHA GAVE JACK A BIG KISS. JACK BLUSHED AND ASKED THEM HOW THEY GOT AWAY. “SO I’M GUSSEING YOU TASHA ARE THE PRINSASSES SISTER AND THAT’S THE PRINSASS. WHO WAS TH GIRL WHO TRIED TO STEAL ME”? “YOU ARE CORRECT, BUT WE HAVE BIGGER ISSUES” SAID TASHA. TASHA LEAD JACK AND THE PRINSASS UP THE STAIRS. “LOOK” JACK LOOKED AT WHAT LOOKED LIKE SHADDERED GLASS. “YOU BROKE THE MIRROR.” JACK SAID THIS AND THEN THERE WAS SILENCE. “YES SADLY WE DID, BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY ME, MY SISTER AND KCAJ HAVE TO LEAVE WITH YOU” THESE WORDS CAME OUT ALL IN A JUMBLED MIX BUT JACK STILL UNDER STOOD. “YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS, OH YEAH” AND THEN THEY LIVED (YOU WISH HAPPILY EVERY AFTER) HAPPILY EVER AFTER TILL THE DAY THE MIRROR WAS PUT BACK TOGETHER, BUT THAT STORY WILL BE TOLD ANOTHER TIME. /






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